EDU
6160 bPortfolio Post 4 Ian
Lewis October
30, 2016
Discuss the
relevance of essay tests to your grade level or subject.
Essay
tests are incredibly relevant to the grade level and subject areas of my
internship experience. The Smarter Balanced Assessment Consortium (SBAC) test
that each seventh grade student completes near the end of the year includes an
essay portion where students read selected passages and respond in essay format
to a relevant prompt. In order to prepare students for this test, while also developing
skills required of seventh grade common core state standards (CCSS), students
work throughout the year to master scaffolded steps that lead to the completion
of entire informative, comparative, or persuasive essays.
In
English Language Arts (ELA), the necessary skills are constantly drilled and
practiced with regard to essay tests, but social studies as well experiences
practice that inevitably assists with the completion of essay tests. At the
start of the year, a pre assessment essay prompt resembling that incorporated
in the SBAC was given to students to assess their entrance essay skills in ELA.
These were graded using a 32 point rubric that then corresponds to a scaled
system of writing bands (0, 0.5, 1, 1.5…4), where students are taught ways and
encouraged in how to increase the band level of their essay writing through
attentiveness to each portion of the rubric (thesis, intro. paragraph, concluding
paragraph, craft/voice, etc.). Further essays will use the same rubric so that
students may continually track and reflect on necessary skills and areas for
progress. However, at this point, we have not actually written any essays or
had any further essay tests. This is because we are still building
foundational, scaffolded skills necessary for an essay, such as the ability to
write effective summaries, and the ability to craft a single, efficient informational
paragraph that incorporates the use of text evidence to support ideas.
The
ability to adequately summarize presents itself in an essay via its
introduction. In crafting a thesis statement relevant to two text excerpts, for
example, a student will be required to create an introductory paragraph that
introduces the texts (titles and authors), briefly summarizes their main
points, and states how such main points relate to a thesis topic, all of which
are steps practiced in writing a summary based on our format of Somebody
(character), Wants (goal), But (conflict), So (rising action, and climax), and
What (falling action, and resolution). In addition to useful summary skills,
single paragraph expertise is required before an essay can be mastered.
To
create a format that is easily transmitted to essay application, students are
taught a specific paragraph structure for writing information paragraphs, which
were practiced twice this quarter. The Step-Up paragraph model uses a
combination of three chunks of three sentences (main idea, incorporated example
from text, and explanation of text evidence as it relates to topic sentence), and
the emphasis of transitions between main ideas, to enable students to create
simply structured informational paragraphs that may later be expanded into
essay format; the three main ideas turn into three body paragraphs, each of
which provides three text examples and three associated explanations. As second
quarter begins next month, we will continue to practice this single paragraph
model, but we will now apply it to the creation of comparative and persuasive paragraphs.
Eventually, we will be ready to practice essays by expanding this single
paragraph structure. As stated before though, it is necessary to teach the
foundational skills necessary before jumping straight into entire essays.
In
addition to specific paragraph writing practice, students experience short
answer questions on all of their ELA reading selection quizzes. While these are
just short answer questions that is not to say they are not useful in establishing
essay test skills. As previously discussed, our paragraph model places an
emphasis of incorporating text evidence and explaining this evidence in
relation to a main idea (skills necessary for crafting successful essays), and
the short answer questions always lend themselves to being turned into a single
paragraph response following this model. While not the primary focus, social
studies also allows for essay skill practice. The social studies unit tests
include short answer questions as well that allow students to practice foundational
skills to be used later when writing expanded essays. Eventually, the single
paragraph practice will turn into the essays and students will begin to be able
to track their growth and progress as essayists using the previously described
rubric and band system.